It's great you're doing comics. They're quite an undertaking, what with having to combine art, story, and dialogue all into one handy package.

My number one compliment is merely the fact you're trying. I'm honest; they're a bitch, and I have huge respect for any who have the guts.

You might want to try polishing these up a little more. I can understand that at the beginning you are still getting your footing, yet on the same note, it shouldn't be too hard to make the comic look less like a doodle and more like a complete drawing. Perhaps you could spend more time on the line art; adding more line 'weight', clean it up, shade even.

Also, beware of easy perspective. Yes, perspective is challenging, but it is very useful. The first two panels are very simplistic one point views, but I'm happy to say that the bottom panel you tried an overhead shot. Good to take risks.

Keep it up! My props to you for going forward with this!

Ah, thank you, thank you. I very much appreciate the compliments and the critiques. I'll do my best to try and shape up things a bit more from here onward. Page two is already forming in my mind, and I'm looking forward to that part...

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Yey Sonic comic!~ I was craking up because I misread the VEEEE as WEEEE and hearing Sonic in my head go wee was hilarious.

Good luck, I'm looking forward to it. I've been trying to make one myself for some time so maybe you'll motivate me too.

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I'LL DRAW FOR YOU IF YOU DO! Instead of commissions I'll ask for a donation of a minimun of $5 and I will draw anything you want!

Ooooh! Nice Tony! *pokes* Do more!

You're welcome. Practice makes perfect!